Sunday, January 27, 2008

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We wished upon a fallen star,
Amidst the broken trees,
That must have come down in the dark
Or just about to be.
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Ian Kellett
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Mary Gordley 28 January 2008

Oh Ian you did a great job of surprising me with that last line. I love poetic surprise. Thanks.

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