Should I..? Poem by Nicole Newton

Should I..?

Rating: 5.0


Should I have taken my life?
Should I have picked up that knife?
Should I have slit open my wrists?
and thrown away my life ideas lists?

NO AND I DIDN'T AND I NEVER WILL!
I was just feeling weak!
My heart was lonely and bleak!
But now I have Yma, Rebma and Eitak
I know I will never have to look back!

I'll forget my bad past,
and hope our good times last,
I miss them I do,
but i must move on, pull through!

Because together we'll fight,
our dreams will take flight,
so thank you Yma, Rebma and Eitak,
you are my life, my crew, my pack!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I lost an amazing group of friends.. but gained a better.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alex Daydream 10 February 2012

Love it: -) glad neither of us actually did take our own life......didn't know u came close 2 doing that: -(and yeah of course you've got me, Rebma and Eitak lol! ! ! We're here 4 u no matter what: -)

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Dave Walker 09 February 2012

A very powerful poem, a really great write.

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