Dylan Tang

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Should I Live...? - Poem by Dylan Tang

...The Cold dark Morning Rises and Past... The Horrid Evening soon Starts with a Saddened twilight Glow...Then the Dark Dusk Dawns across the Contaminated World... Then it Repeats with no slight Differences at All... Seeing the Girl I Loved and who Hated Me, it Scars my Shattered Heart... When I think About Her, I Couldn't Stop myself but it Made me Break Out a Tear... I was Once Happy, with Trustworthy Family and Close Friends... But Nowadays you Just can't Trust Anyone... The World is in a Quiet but Blood-Stained War... I only Wish that I was Deaf and Blind so I could Miss Out the Eerie Pain from Every Poor Soul... The People around Hurts me, Quite A Lot too... I Can't Bare the Pain Any more... I'm getting Sick Of Life, I just want to Sleep and Wish that I won't Wake Up to See The Next Cold Morning... If I Do Die, Does it Make a Difference to the World...? Am I even Worthy Enough to Live...? Should I Die...? Or should I Live...?


Comments about Should I Live...? by Dylan Tang

  • (12/4/2009 3:00:00 PM)


    Life is a canvas that has to be painted. Your spirit needs some tranquillity, and to forget dying. There is so much to do, experience and do...onward, now! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 4, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, December 11, 2009


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