Sick Comments

Thank you sarah :) And Ty im happy this touched your heart, nobody in my life had cancer when i wrote this, it all just comes from my heart and the inspiration music gives me. i really hope your mother is okay x

This was just BEAUTIFUL ;) if this is true, im really really sorry, this was expressed wonderfully into a poem that made a tear come to my eye your rhyming scheme was very nicely layed out as well 10+

This poem really touched my heart. in a few months my mom has to get another look at her breast to make sure its not cancer and everytime we go to the dr it scares. me....the thought of loosing a parent is very scary. my thoughts and prayers are with you and your family