Sick And Twisted Comments

wow its great. i understand it so easily. most of mine arnt rhyming but it still has a point to it mostly b/c im a begainer. but i loved thisone you wrote. :)

obvious rhyme, yet i found myself pulled into the poem, your work reminds me of how i used to write some years back, back when i bled the words of Jim morrison, and Kurt, and breathed the words of a thousand other well fed tortured souls best regards V