Sucked bone dry by love
Slapped in the face by its iron glove
Living in this empty desert scene
Colourless, just give me shades of green
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Adria, depends on how big the pen is and if they can do anything else, i dont think they would be happy, so it does
interesting composition, sickness of the unloved, nice title you gave justice to your content.......10
Loved reading this one. The first 2 lines by themselves have enough content in them to make up the entire poem. Brilliant!