Tuesday, March 10, 2009

Sickness Of The Unloved Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sucked bone dry by love
Slapped in the face by its iron glove
Living in this empty desert scene
Colourless, just give me shades of green
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Gordon D Wilkinson
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Roshni D'Souza 15 March 2009

Loved reading this one. The first 2 lines by themselves have enough content in them to make up the entire poem. Brilliant!

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Gordon Wilkinson 10 March 2009

Adria, depends on how big the pen is and if they can do anything else, i dont think they would be happy, so it does

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Catrina Heart 10 March 2009

interesting composition, sickness of the unloved, nice title you gave justice to your content.......10

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Gordon D Wilkinson

Gordon D Wilkinson

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