Silence Poem by Odhiambo Gilbert Francis

Silence

Rating: 5.0


The river is no more,
No flood, no splash, no roar;
A solitary portion, a king missing his throne
Kowtows to bemoan the hard fate that left him forlorn.

The praises have ceased,
Joy and dreams... deceased;
Hearts that once sung with zest followed the birds to the west
Where the sun shines best and potency is confessed.

In life's final lap,
Useless is your trap,
No gay yarns for excited ears nor tissue for cheery tears;
The end of affairs often times doom declares.

Yet, in the stillness,
In love's loud silence,
Listen, listen and you will hear your heart beat a tune so dear,
Bringing back to you cheer and making fears disappear.

Be good at loving,
Be good at loving;
Love yourself first before for others you grow a thirst.
If this rule is reversed, when they leave you'll feel so cursed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dedan Onyango 25 June 2015

A great piece there, the length of the lines creates the atmosphere of our slowly depreciating life. Love yourself first before for others you grow a thirst

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Henry Nyandiko 03 October 2013

A wonderful and interesting piece

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George Juma 24 September 2013

Rich in phonological and structural devices.

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Judith Awiti 19 September 2013

Awesome piece...Be good at loving...love yourself first.... I love it

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Ramesh Rai 18 September 2013

beautiful write. you are right indeed, first love yourself. loved your write.

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