Thursday, October 8, 2015

Silence Comments

Rating: 4.5

My thoughts are painful
They strain against the barriers of conditioning

My smile is mockery
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Rachel Bari
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Chinedu Dike 17 October 2015

A well articulated piece of poetry, insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Rachel.

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Kelly Kurt 08 October 2015

A powerful but dark take on the theme of silence. Thanks for sharing, Rachel

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