Thursday, October 29, 2009

Silence Of The Shadows Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the silence of the shadows
a heart lay in tatters,
torn apart by loves advances
of an unwanted kind.
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David Harris
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Fay Slimm 30 October 2009

David the sad fact of having to write about such a subject you have overcome with much tender thought written into this piece - - there is every need to show compassion to victims of this kind of unwanted 'love' - - a strong but sensitve verse 10 from Fay.

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Alison Cassidy 30 October 2009

A lyrical and tender-hearted description of a hideous crime. This is a very fine poem, David. Your title is excellent and the poem that follows makes its sad point with great eloquence. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Carol Gall 29 October 2009

great title and is so true as described 10

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Patti Masterman 29 October 2009

Some will always believe love can be achieved by force, unfortunately. Sensitive writing about your theme.

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