Silent World -1 Poem by ZEN POEM

Silent World -1

Rating: 5.0


turn on the light
still accept
those cann't want
would flourish to perish anew
light doesn't battle darkness
walks up it just
and walks over
and seems that
such darkness doesn't exist

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 12 May 2009

Very nice short poem, how light works, nice composition. 10++

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 18 April 2009

light doesn't battle darkness walks up it just and walks over and seems that such darkness doesn't exist...............Good Write............

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Roland Bastien 11 March 2008

light doesn't battle darkness - good understanding of empiness

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