Friday, March 8, 2019

Silverware Knives Comments

Rating: 5.0

We hear you;
We see the knife you hold,
Lurking in the shadows to be told.
Outside the window,
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Aimee Brimson
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Jazib Kamalvi 08 March 2019

Write comment. Very impressive write, Aimee. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Julian Mann 08 March 2019

Very good. A graceful poem about an atrocious act. 'You held the knife in your pocket In once an innocent hand But then you raised the blade And pierced the skin with no aid.' - very memorable lines. Well done.

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Aimee Brimson 08 March 2019

Thank you - in the UK knife crime is such a big topic at the moment and I thought it was such a practical thing to write about. Having memorable lines like those seeking allows people to truly think about what they would/could do if they decided to commit a crime

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