Tuesday, May 28, 2013

Simplest Things Comments

Rating: 5.0

The rain pours so slowly
when your mind is lost,
between the world of dreams and the eyesores
of reality
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David Thomas
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Lorraine Colon 28 May 2013

Beautiful, and heart-rending. I could feel your emotions as I read each line. Very well done.

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