seema gupta

Rookie (11 oct / India)

'Since You Gone' - Poem by seema gupta

'Since you gone'

Storms in the eyes,
Desert heart land.
Feelings of suffocation
Combustion potential.
Moment of blazing coals,
As horrible pain,
Death altercation
Flux of stone body.

Since you.............gone...

Comments about 'Since You Gone' by seema gupta

  • Ranjan Kumar Ghosh (10/28/2017 10:13:00 PM)

    Death altercation this line is very beautiful (Report) Reply

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  • Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee (1/30/2010 10:51:00 AM)

    very precise and dry, intellectual, images... reminding me of Ezra Pound's poems..
    Compact graphics of imagination coupled with passion..Lovely expressions of sadness and longing
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2009 10:54:00 PM)

    So, sweet. marvelous... (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2009 10:16:00 AM)

    words are inked with tears with colors of pain, sadness ane despair (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 1:49:00 AM)

    simple, staright forward and lovely (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 11, 2012

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