seema gupta

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'Come Quietly' - Poem by seema gupta

When the sun might be diffused
Be seized and red in the sky
A soft wind gust
Scattered to touch your hair

Edge of the moon is shining
Even the stars to wake sleeping
doors chain quitely
Be hiding in the arms of sleep
Roaming stray pieces of cloud
Become gatekeepers turns cautious
Hiding in solitude
I will opened the door of heart
You come quietly
peeping in my eyes
to live Ages in a singal moment


Comments about 'Come Quietly' by seema gupta

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (12/5/2009 2:12:00 AM)


    Edge of the moon is shining
    Even the stars to wake sleeping
    doors chain quitely
    Be hiding in the arms of sleep.................................
    quest of spumes riffles by shining moon
    floats in air to delve mirth from hued blue
    at times passion peeks into room of reason
    lest jingle may calling from mango grove..................utterly inspiring, yet passionate, wrought ingenious by imagery,10++++, thanks for sharing
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  • (12/5/2009 1:40:00 AM)


    I will opened the door of heart
    You come quietly
    peeping in my eyes
    to live Ages in a singal moment

    a sweet and very meaningful poem with rich idea and expression is very much poetic too..well done 10/10
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 11, 2012


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