Monday, October 19, 2009

Single Candle Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

The warm glow of a single candle flame
beckons a weary stranger there
to the bosom of a warm fire in
from the nighttime's cold.
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David Harris
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Patti Masterman 19 October 2009

What a lonely chill this gave me..god bless all lonely waiting hearts..(smile)

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Carol Gall 19 October 2009

eerie but good i like eerie its like the prairie 10

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Jean Dament 19 October 2009

Although there is a sad story within the poem it is enjoyable to read & well written. Thanks for sharing. errors: 'nighttimes cold'-should be 'nighttime's cold' & 'long a weary trek'-should be 'long weary trek' ok Ravensong

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