Sky Nearly Full (Haiku) Poem by Richard Terrify

Sky Nearly Full (Haiku)



sky nearly full
one upon another
billowy cloud

Sunday, June 4, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,sky
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 04 June 2006

This is a nearly full haiku imo Richard. It could be a fuller one imo but you know that! I really like your work, but this one, left me wanting! No offence meant....honest Tai

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