Sleep's Uncharted Ocean Poem by Lea Simpson

Sleep's Uncharted Ocean

Rating: 5.0


Like a wide and frothy sea
I dream it’ll wash over me
Longed for tides of tranquillity

I dream that it’ll come tonight
And end my awful nightly plight

Because I only dream with eyes wide open
Dreams of sleep’s uncharted ocean

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 01 February 2006

Excellent poem, again. Rather unsettling image in the excellent closing lines, and the perfect use of the slight discord of the last rhyme (a slant rhyme, I think I just read somewhere) . -chuck

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