Saturday, December 26, 2009

Sleepless Nights Comments

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Sleepless nights give me time to wonder why
Sleepless nights give me time to sit and cry
I know you still like me, I hope you still care
But sometimes I get selfish and think its not fair
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Caitlin Walls
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Lady KrimZen 26 December 2009

Nice poem. It is simple and expresses emotion quite smoothly. The repetition has been used very nicely and effectively. As much as I hate the Teen Romance genre, you have written a nice Teen Romance poem without making it too sloppy like some other poems I have read. I commend you for a good read and your accomplishments in this poem.

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