Sleepwalkers Poem by Edmund V. Strolis

Sleepwalkers

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Take a horse install a horn, voila unicorn
The mundane is now magic it seems
How sad to have such silly dreams

Chest thumping, jungle crashing ape
Flare your nostrils, bare your teeth
With the Yeti you can't compete

There is something to be said
For the limits of the average mind
The brain needs prodding all the time

How bizarre must this universe be
To awaken them from their sleep
You are the plankton, the mental sheep

People shuffle their way through life
I do not mean to denigrate or demean
The sleepwalker lost within a dream.

Sleepwalkers
Saturday, October 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madathil Rajendran Nair 16 October 2016

The sleep-walker lost within a dream! We are all sleep-walking all the time even when we thump our chests and swear by the so-called waking reality. I hear echos of ancient Indian thought in your poem where they classify things into real (the truth) , non-real (that which take birth and perish in time) and unreal (like your unicorn, a horned rabbit or a barren woman's son) . That last line reminded me of a poem I wrote long ago. It is titled Inebriation. It is at PH. I invite you to read it if time permits. (10)

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Susan Williams 16 October 2016

There are those who sleepwalk through their days on earth, plodding down a well-worn path, then there are others who try to stay awake to the song of life in crickets and bees and birds and sagebrush and a stranger's kindly smile. Life is a feast if one is awake, that is. Great write. Thought-provoking.10

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