Thursday, April 26, 2007

Sleepy Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Kiddy catnap even old
Cuddle, snuggle, if it's cold
Nuzzle, snuzzle will unfold
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JoAnn McGrath
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Theresa Moore 06 May 2007

Your poem captures the fading in and out of fatigue overcoming wakefulness. I think I am ready for a nap. Cleverly written.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 26 April 2007

Oh to sleep to dream... I am sure some one wise said that, must be english..; -) sweet dreams JoJo... andy x

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