Slice Of Heart Poem by Xiangu HHE

Slice Of Heart

Rating: 4.7


Fish Is off the table
My heart Though red
and tender
How big a slice
You like for breakfast

Thursday, November 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 11 December 2017

Fish, table, heart. tender, slice a powerful poem. silently you speak volumes....... thank yu dear poetess. tony

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Xiangu HHE 11 December 2017

I am grateful........ 😊

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Rebecca Navarre 03 December 2017

A Very Heart Powerful Felt Poem! ! ! ! ! Excellently Expressed! ! ! ! ! Ever So Very Very Many 10S! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! !

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Xiangu HHE 04 December 2017

Rebecca, your comment put a big ever smile on my face the whole day :)) ...... you must be lovely a girl!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 November 2017

Slice of heart is brilliantly expressed with mood of breakfast really. An amazing poem is well penned.10

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Xiangu HHE 30 November 2017

Mermaid is the fish.... :))

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Xiangu HHE 30 November 2017

That's so kind of you, sure tonight I will have a sweet dream.....

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