Slides Its Way Down Poem by Minnie Gehrig

Slides Its Way Down

Rating: 5.0


the way our face hits the glass,
n slides its way down,
seemingly we frown
on the dark days,
the way his shoulders moved,
there own pace n the daylight,
but at midnight i was alone,
n pretending i loved it,
while yet another muse glided on the wheels of
my loves soul...
n what can be done with that,
lose myself n the empty glass,
while my reflection fades,
becomes less n less then what i brought with today...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 08 May 2011

Great poem. Very well described. Great imagery and style. Excellent stuff. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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