Awakening Poem by Minnie Gehrig

Awakening

Rating: 2.8


I start anew in the eyes of the sun,
and glimmer golden
under the touch of your eyes,

all warm and fiery you
give me the light
i will see by,

no more blind paths in the darkness
but open arms
and vauge smiles,

all fresh like the november air
that brushes my skin
In the early morning
of my awakening.............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 25 July 2011

A very impressive and poignant poem that obviously shows your great poetic talent! 10+++ I love the imagery embedded on it! Keep inspiring the World! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 14 November 2010

‘Awakening Smearing Light To bright Picturesque Vibe sight’ ~ niv [from rough cut poem] Thanks sharing Hon’ble Poet Gehrig Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Hans Vr 06 November 2010

What a wonderful way to start a November day I like it really very much want to wake up tomorrow just as such. Very nice write.

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