Sunday, May 8, 2011

Slides Its Way Down Comments

Rating: 5.0

the way our face hits the glass,
n slides its way down,
seemingly we frown
on the dark days,
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Minnie Gehrig
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 08 May 2011

Great poem. Very well described. Great imagery and style. Excellent stuff. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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