slightly tips ;
the leaves fall
one by one
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Santōka's poems, and haiku in general, were written in one line with the reader supplying the pauses. Although Santōka's haiku were written in an extremely free style with regard to the 5-7-5-syllable pattern, many seem to fall into a two-line pattern..
The correct text: Horohoro yōte ko no ha furu '' slightly tipsy; / the leaves fall / one by one ''