james tj24

Rookie (i'm 15 / California)

Slow Down - Poem by james tj24

As one drives by thinking
of only the future I
walk behind them on the
lonely road for I live
in only the present for that
I may embrace the world
give to me by God


Comments about Slow Down by james tj24

  • Michael ShafferMichael Shaffer (10/13/2008 8:49:00 PM)

    Nice. Such powerful verse from a young person. I know you are 15, but hwen you are 40,15 is young. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 13, 2008



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