Slow Heart Poem by Monica Rose

Slow Heart

Rating: 5.0


Stuck in here
With a heart
That is broken

Tears stream
Down my face
Like a river
On a stormy day

Rushing thoughts
Go though my head
Like a race track
With no end

My heart beats
Faster and Stronger
Air losses from my breath

Scribbles of ink
I write down
To say to you

You have made a mistake
Giving me your heart
Was a mistake..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

you wrote it all really fine..but you made a mistake in the last line.. giving one's heart to someone else is a beautiful mistake, and beautiful was missing i felt. keep it up dear. :)

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Joseph Poewhit 21 November 2009

Real outpouring of feelings in few words

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