Friday, June 17, 2016

Smack Comments

Rating: 5.0

Malnourished willow limbs hang above me
Rough bark laden with track mark's deeper than the craters of the moon
Caressing my skin in a comfort tone of baby blue
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Cassidy Graves
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Chinedu Dike 18 June 2016

The obsessive agony of addiction is beautifully portrayed in this lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly penned in good poetic diction with conviction. An insightful poem nicely brought forth with the inward eye. Thanks for sharing Cassidy. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Lyn Paul 18 June 2016

Expressed well the pain of addiction. So good to pen this. Thank you and good health and happiness to you

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