Tuesday, February 17, 2015

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You see my family on TV
Primates living wild and free
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Jackie Ann
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Roseann Shawiak 19 February 2015

Totally intense poem, that poor little monkey being treated so inhumanely! Thank you for exposing the truth of animal testing and research just to make people look younger for a while. It needs to be stopped, what you have shown in your poem is so utterly cruel. It's hard to believe people actually do this for a living! An amazing write, you have captured the monkey's plight expertly and emotionally. Many people will be affected by your poem and hopefully something will be done about it now.

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Suburban Lovechild 18 February 2015

Very gut-wrenching, you ca feel the pain of the baby monkey, thank you for sharing, great write. Please check out my poems, I'd appreciate it.

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