Wednesday, July 10, 2013

Smile In Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I had the power at my command,
I would carve you a snowflake in the palm of my hand.
I would craft you a bed out of warm desert sands.
But there is no way to show my devotion
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Harry Radcliffe
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Lucifera Santez 20 August 2013

well i cant imagine why it wouldn't win. every poem of yours, its just magic. But even if I made these of land and sea, You would be just as beautiful without me. you twist the words very well on your whim. wish i had talent like that. well wishing cant get me anywhere now, can it? by the way, are all your poems written for this particular someone special? then the muse must be Aphrodite for you.... :)

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Valerie Dohren 10 July 2013

A lovely and very imaginative write. Well done on winning a competition with it - well deserved.

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