Snow Poem by Falling Awake

Snow

Rating: 5.0

A white fine toothed comb
Runs through my being
Neuron knots de-conditioning
Liberating, freeing

My cells zing to life
Thought chains unbroken
So interesting, so possible
My being's woken

With each sinus sip
Stewing thoughts release
Visceral knots untwist and turn
Increasing heart beats

Skipping down the rails
Through July it snows
I feel my insides untangle
No longer enclosed.

Sunday, October 15, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: snow,flow,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terence Craddock 15 January 2024

I wrote the poem 'Snowballs: Shaped Beauty Cast Lines', inspired by the poem 'Snow', by the poet Falling Awake and dedicated to Falling Awake.

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Terence Craddock 14 January 2024

snow balls the reader with several exquisite times : )

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