Snow Fall Poem by Savannah Satrk

Snow Fall



You, me, in the snow...
Flakes falling in our hair,
Foreheads touching under the dormant trees.
Looking at eachother,
Fingers numb, hearts warm,
The idea of you close.
I know I like you more than you like me,
What will never be,
Impossible to think of,
I feel the pain.
To you I am low,
And I can only dream of what will never be.
Why can't i stop wishing and
praying for the pain to go away?

I barely know you...
But I can't wait to see you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marisol Smith 26 June 2009

Lovely poem...I love the amount of detail and intonation you put into your poems...keep writing! -Mare :)

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