Saturday, January 17, 2009

Snowbound Gayle. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feather-light flakes of now what seem weighty
White have all day fallen outside your door.
Unable to walk, is everyone skating
While facing challenges not known before?
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Fay Slimm
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Ann Beard 17 January 2009

Oh how I loved the snow when I was young. A lovely warm poem for your friend and a beautiful image. regards Ann

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 January 2009

Very Nicely done, young lass! And for a fellow New Yorker, i am ever more pleased to see this! Gayle, like yourself, is class-act personified...and most worthy of this dedicational! It's frigid where i am....4 degrees as of 6am sat. morn..Fay is a good hour north of me, in middle-upstate New York, where i hear-tell the temps there are 0 zero to -10....Which reminds me...A +10 from FjR 4 FAY! F j R 2009

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Kris Smith 17 January 2009

Lovely piece Fay think I'll pop round myself and have that toddy 10 ++++ Chris

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 17 January 2009

Well nothing like a hot toddy.. Andy 10

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Fay Slimm

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