Friday, February 16, 2007

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Rain crashed against the window,
Wind howling through the leaves of the trees.
Forks of lightning brightening the skies,
Thunder is shouting and telling lies.
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Danielle Newell
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Great poem. I like the way you brush off all the bad to focus on the good. I really like your optimisim at the end.

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Katrina Thompson 16 February 2007

good poem! ! ! keep up the good work

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Danielle Newell

Danielle Newell

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