Friday, June 26, 2009

So Close Comments

Rating: 4.5

Westward we head
In search of surf and sun
We ran faster
Stretched further
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Ryan Leonard
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Autumn Jones 17 August 2009

I like it. It flows smooth and isn't two long. Asks good questions. Nice. I give it a 9.

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~ Jon London ~ 27 July 2009

Well done Ryan.....penned with flow of life's colour and feeling...keep expressing

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