Saturday, November 19, 2011

So He Takes A Drink Comments

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His wife leaves
And he needs to grieve
So he takes a drink.
He gets laid off
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Savannah marie
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Cosmic Dreamer 03 December 2011

I love the imagery your poem painted, although it is pretty sad... But life can be sad if we don't help one another... Very nice poem, keep up the good work...

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