So You Think Poem by Aamir Abdullah

So You Think

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So, you think, you can
Swim through the cold, deep ocean
Depending on a lonesome straw
Which lost the fire of its soul
.............................. years ago
Fighting against the icebergs

So, you think, you can
Touch the sky
Riding on a moth's wings
Who is in love with the flame
And lives to kiss the fire once

So, you think, you can
Find the door of a dome
Lost into the walls
And get the answer of
All your passionate knockings

So, you think, you can
Lit up my heart again
Buried into the snow
Died, before it was frozen.

Wednesday, September 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: think
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A B Faniki 05 October 2019

A lovely piece with beautiful imagery and lovely words flow. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 September 2019

So, you think, you can Swim through the cold, deep ocean Depending on a lonesome straw Which lost the fire of its soul...very powerful imagtination and thoughts. thank u dear poet. tony

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