Thursday, January 22, 2009

‘society's Not The Reason, It's The Effect' Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m longing for something that’ll give me a reason,
To sit out this bitter and lonely cold season,
But there’s nothing that lingers long enough in my brain,
To stop me from fearing the wind and the rain,
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Alicia Bridget Smith
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Cody Passey 22 January 2009

Beggining to end: an inspration 10

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Joseph Poewhit 22 January 2009

Hope like a tiny life preserver, in the middle of the ocean.

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LOVEFOOL Aka 22 January 2009

Very powerful write, loads of meaning and strong images

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J.J. Bradford 22 January 2009

you're very good, this poem is also very good i loved reading it and it had a message everyone can relate to. -JJ

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