Soft Sobs Poem by Teighlor Little

Soft Sobs

Rating: 5.0


Soft sobs,
Hard kicks,
Only hurt,
No tricks.

Soft sobs,
Hard blows,
Head to toe,
Bruises show.

Mommy loves me,
Daddy don't,
Don't ask me to cry,
I can't, I wont.

Broken limbs,
Torn apart,
Does he even,
Have a heart?

Some bruises are black,
Some are blue,
I'm hurt every day,
Sad but true.

I will win,
I can tell,
Because 'daddy, '
Will rot in hell.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Franshata Sanders 12 May 2011

very well put together.. i rate it 10.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 12 May 2011

Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery. Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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