Thursday, March 15, 2012

Solar Dream Comments

Rating: 4.5

Eyes luminous as stars sear my hidden lust

Your heart like a black hole betrays my trust
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David Orioli
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David Orioli 17 March 2012

Thank you very much Romeo! I appreciate your generous comment. I'm just starting to learn my craft haha so i'm glad for the positive review! Thank you again.

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Romeo Della Valle 15 March 2012

Wow! What a powerful and well crafted write that clearly touches the reader! A reservoir of meaningful words! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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David Orioli 15 March 2012

Thank you very much sir! I appreciate your kind words

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Wahab Abdul 15 March 2012

what a it is! very strong and powerful with great meaning, i like the poem.

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David Orioli

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