Solemn Utterance Comments

Love and togetherness: Tenderly, this melody's swaying us How we feel, it needs no words They speak transparently, our hearts Lovely poem. Rich by the choice of images and vocabulary

Im no poet, but that's my woman right there, love her so much ♥️

A great start with a nice poem, Rishina. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

Together, in the night we dance Space-hushed, heartbeats Tenderly, swaying melody slowly our lips touch hold hands ‘til sun greets us Can we borrow your golden time? I laugh and laugh again Enchanting place, life a dream, Our bodies, as we embrace, melt Soothing, as we kiss, God willing, we'll be wedded bliss and‘ve li'l ones These are the points which i collected from your poem after reading it carefully.. Thank you very much for this poem It shows the brilliance of your mind and intellect. Thank you This poem is just beautiful. Full of love and feeling and emotion. Make it the best poem of your collection and request all your friends to read it and comment on it and vote on it.. Thank you dear poetess. how much time you would have spent to write such a masterpiece. Tony god bles you.

nature inspired, good write, go on.