Monday, November 30, 2009

Someone Smiles Painstakingly Comments

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Awake often my little red eyes
While in the graveyard shift.
Sometimes my precious eyes need a long sleep
But I tell 'please wake till morn
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 27 December 2009

Night duty - they call it in the medical profession. The graveyard shift too has special challenges to do with circadian rhythms and the like. No wonder your poor eyes complain. And yet you turn a painful irritation into a poem of great eloquence and artistry. I wonder how many of your ideas come to you when your eyes are closed. Another fine poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 30 November 2009

The little blind girl adds her final compelling touch to this surreal poem. Warm regards, Sandra

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Ramin Chaman 30 November 2009

Sometimes my precious eyes need a long sleep it is to slake one's thirst. .

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