Wednesday, December 7, 2005

Something Completely Different Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once you’ve succeeded in a task
do not try to repeat it;
hot water in a vacuum flask
should never be reheated,
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gershon hepner
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Hugh Cobb 07 December 2005

A very nice effort. This is a very tight poem and I like the humor & twist at the end. A 10 from me. PS: Thank you for your kind comments. A joyous holiday season to you. HDC

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Raynette Eitel 07 December 2005

Single malt is always good. Your poem is so true, concise and well done. Raynette

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 07 December 2005

nicely put...and so true!

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