Trees would speak if we could understand;
The mountains would rise if we treat them like land;
The silence would break, if it had something to say;
But things were not made to be that way;
The innocent creatures would come to greet us;
If we treat them, as they treat us;
The sea would calm, yet let waves roll;
If we had a purer soul;
the sadness would all be relieved;
If we didnt always take what we pleased;
and dig ourselves a deeper hole;
in mother nature's soul.
the years pass by without satisfaction;
something we can only do without sanction;
the sky would fall if it had reason;
after summer would come another season.
all of these add up to nothing more than a well thought dream,
but we, with our actions could make it something more;
something that would make the soar.
doing this is not an easy task;
but if someone were to ask;
tell them that the world could be different;
and we could all help along with it.
I like the poem...it has a sort of domino effect to a better world......Vallerie
its a really good poem, i normally dont like reading peoples poems but i liked yours alot. i love how even with it rhyming it still sounded good, made sence, and cought my eye..it didnt trail off subject or anything. very creative too
Could somone tell me what they think about this poem? or how i can improve it?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow good poem! i'm really bad at rhyming so i admire your ability to make a serious poem in verse. ~Rose