Something More Or Less Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Something More Or Less

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I must do something more
Not with words just to adore
What do I look in her for?
Wait eagerly to dance on floor?

She has lot more to care
About me, family and then to dare
She may openly opt for me
But she is not independent and free

I will never make her to walk
With less worries to talk
Hand in hand for morning stroll
To prevent any disaster or further fall

It has been decided
Many unpleasant thins are avoided
No bitterness so far as words are concerned
Face the situation jointly if turned

Occasional natural bath in open
In monsoon when clouds appear sudden
That charm is not to be lost
It has to be enjoyed at any cost

You may hang her painting on wall
Write words in honor and call
"My dearest of dear in this beautiful world"
What a lovely luck to be in your fold!

As two wheels of car smoothly move
Let there be no misgivings to remove
Goal is one, journey is combined
The life as such is well defined

Time may prove and dictate
We may watch only to relate
Life may have many surprises
Somewhere lapses and somewhere fulfillment of promises

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 March 2013

Anette Neumann · 2 mutual friends JUst so ??v??e. ¦¦_??? ? BEAUTIFUL 6 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Harriet James likes this. Some Girl Nicely written, words of togetherness :) nice Anthony Huggup6 minutes ago very lovely

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 March 2013

Great poem! Chrissie Whitley4 minutes ago Good rhyming! Great flow. Comment +1 Great mystery in Love and waiting, wanting DrTom Miller CPhd2 minutes ago The poem today has so many of my thoughts captive and are so famimilar. Great work Comment +1 There is definitely something profound in this. Amanda Hodge5 minutes ago The feeling is definitely there. Comment +1 Very nice. Meaghan Wallace5 minutes ago I would love to see more of your work. Comment +1 long Barbara Gonzales3 minutes ago I am into short poems

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 March 2013

I must do something more Not with words just to adore

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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