Sometimes I feel alive
sometimes I feel dead
sometimes my heart hurts
sometimes it's all in my head
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I give a 10. I totally understand all of this. and its nicely written.
im new to this site i was just looking around and i came across this poem i really like it and its a poem i can relate to it it s very good and full with mix emotions which i find very good
i really liked your poem, i was able to relate to it because i have felt all of these emotions before, you know you are a true poet when you can right about the way you feel :) congratulations its really good x
Wowww.. this is sooo good..