Saturday, January 10, 2009

Sometimes Comments

Rating: 4.6

Sometimes I feel alive
sometimes I feel dead
sometimes my heart hurts
sometimes it's all in my head
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True Pain
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Veronika 07 May 2018

Wowww.. this is sooo good..

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Ashish Tyagi 02 April 2014

simply explained everything that happens to everyone SOMETIMES

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Cheyenne Killion 09 January 2014

I give a 10. I totally understand all of this. and its nicely written.

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Neha Dutt 23 September 2013

A clear picture of mixed emotions, very simple and good read.

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Lycko Chizo 06 August 2009

This is nice.10++++

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im new to this site i was just looking around and i came across this poem i really like it and its a poem i can relate to it it s very good and full with mix emotions which i find very good

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Jane Uku 24 May 2009

Sometimes, I just want to be me. Great poem, love it.

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Jodie Pollock 27 January 2009

i really liked your poem, i was able to relate to it because i have felt all of these emotions before, you know you are a true poet when you can right about the way you feel :) congratulations its really good x

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