Renee Marie

Freshman - 919 Points (Danbury, CT USA)

Sometimes - Poem by Renee Marie

The total eclipse of the moon is of NO significance
to someone, tonight.
The heart is eclipsed by shock.
The eyes sting from a laser gone wild then
aimed with precision!
Right at that moment between
awe and surrender where rage fuels action
sometimes, Cancer doesn't win!


Topic(s) of this poem: acceptance, cancer, cancer in children, neuroblastoma

Form: Free Verse

Poet's Notes about The Poem

tonight there is a 'Blood Red' eclipse of the moon.It is 7: 45 pm in Sacramento, CA and in Connecticut it is 10: 45 pm.I am writing a poem, my Sister is grieving the terrible reality of her beautiful 5-yr old Son diagnosed with Neuroblastoma.The natural world was once a healing treasure to her and tonight, I sense, she cannot be delighted by Mother Nature.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 27, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 27, 2018

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