What was she to do when you went away?
Sit on her bed and just sing?
Nothing but you was on her mind every day
everytime she looked on her finger that had no ring.
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This poem was HOTT, i loved this poem especially, i guess because I went through a similar experience, i mean i wasn't laid in no1's bed and we wasn't engages but the experience was just like how you described them in your poem. :)
So far this is the best one you have wrote. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work. Always remember Jesus loves you and God does to. Also God answers prayers.