Jane Tomlin

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Sonnet - Poem by Jane Tomlin

My desperate love for you was so strong
But it is hopeless we have grown apart
I now know that the love we had was wrong
You are no longer deep inside my heart.

I've never known a love-rat such as you
I despise you, you are weak and helpless
Oh Hell, what mustI do, what must I do
Our love has become one gigantic mess.

We no longer have a thing between us
Love twisted my heart, put me in the dark
Love is a cold-hearted feeling of lust
My life with you has left a deep, blind mark.

Goodbye's the saddest word I know,
Pack your bags, get out of my life and just GO!


Comments about Sonnet by Jane Tomlin

  • (6/9/2005 8:08:00 AM)


    Better to have loved and lost.....! ! This poem is GROOVY! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • (3/3/2005 6:33:00 AM)


    LOL SO FUNNY! ! ! ! i really like it! ! ! give me more! ! ! ! can u send me some? my email address foreva_gone2@hotmail.com i think ur poems are excellent! (really i just want to copy ur work) BUT! they will get published so its no problem... just under my name! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 14, 2005



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