Alan Dolan

Sonnet, Amazed - Poem by Alan Dolan

I may not
Unthread our tapestries,
Unsay the years between,
Unmake your loss,
Unsmile my joy
At our new meeting,
Uncolour the dawn,
Unname my words,
Untouch your softness,
Untaste your mouth,
Unlearn your body,
Unsing the moment,
Unlove your gift,
Redeem my love.

Comments about Sonnet, Amazed by Alan Dolan

  • Josephine Dunn (7/18/2009 3:05:00 PM)

    This is beautiful :) (Report)Reply

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  • (10/27/2007 7:08:00 PM)

    Original use of negative 'uns' resolved by a final positive line. Good work. Cheers. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 19, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 21, 2012

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